When you left, I promised myself
to build us a mountain
for our future;
each day, a bucketful of sand;
building this monument
towards the sky.
When you return, in my dreaming,
your journeys at an end;
together then;
each day, the winds of time will take
a bucketful of sand,
until it’s gone
Shared with Momoetry April Poet Month challenge – ekphrastic and WDYS #285 picture prompt and the idea came after reading Time Passes here
Charlie Zero The Poet Music picks & Reviews #19 and my quick thoughts:
Trepaneringsritualen – Getting Neubauten and Keuhkot vibes from this. As others mention at bandcamp – riveting, terrifying, menacing! A good Thursday morning downer.
Haunted Horses – If this was the first time I heard this style or genre then I would love this. Very good.
Gay Beast – This is my kinda thing and already familiar to me. I’m always looking for more music along these lines.
Lunar Mistake – I like this, it could grow on me. The vocals put me off on the first song but are nice on others. Kinda soft-prog. Gonna listen some more.
Atrium Carceri – I don’t have time for this. I’m not a young man anymore. I get all the ambient noise I want at 8 pm in my jungle village.


This is so touching Shaun. I love the emotions you’ve put into your poem. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks Sadje, glad you liked it. 🙏
Hopefully others do too. 🙂
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I’m sure they will. You’re very welcome
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I should also comment that the initial inspiration for this write came from the first line of Di’s poem – Time Passes
Sometimes you just need a word or two to trigger the imagination.
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Thank you so much for the mention!
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Very lovely, and beautifully read too.
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Thanks Rosemary 🙏
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A touching poem, depicting loss and hope through time passage like the hourglass.
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Thanks Gloria 🙏
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Wonderful poem, Shaun!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you 🙏
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This is quite lovely Shaun.
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Thanks Di 🙏
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