a little line of dancing taps
the keys make words
and the words are key
neuron-fired inspirers
transferred to fingers
– stories without end
getting to the heart of it
grand secrets bleed out
beating the resistance
the rambling essence
authenticity
cracked and revealed
An up and down cherita inspired by a section of writing at Spinning Visions blog
A wonderful reading of this powerful poem
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It’s difficult to analyse how well oneself reads I think. It does make me consider what is written and how it should be read. I’m still learning.
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I always enjoy listening to poems read their work. Whatever you do will be right as you are the owner.
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I love this one Beautiful Its playful and deep “the rambling essence
authenticity cracked and revealed” That’s authenticity Nothing better than that
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Thanks so much Marja 🙏
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I enjoyed the reading of your poem. Our minds are filled with never-ending stories waiting to be tapped out one keystroke at a time.
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Nothing better than authenticity in poetry!
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I understand the artistic attitude of show and don’t tell in poetry but I also believe in telling and telling well. Sometimes we don’t need to beat around the bush.
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I love the idea – and the reality – that tapping the keys is another way to resist, be authentic, speak truth to power. A wonderful message.
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“getting to the heart of it
grand secrets bleed out
beating the resistance”
In your wonderful reading of this poem I saw/heard how the tapping of the keys related to the “beating.” Heart and blood, all in passion has the rhythm, the drum, that ultimately crack and reveal . . .
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A unique take on the prompt. I like how you’ve used the word ‘resistance’ here.
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Thanks Sumana 🙏
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A powerful poem, read powerfully.
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