Written for the GloPoWriMo Day 2 prompt: Write a poem that directly addresses someone, and that includes a made-up word, an odd/unusual simile, a statement of “fact,” and something that seems out of place in time. Inspired by a piece of writing by David Elikwu.
Hey, Mister Saxomaphone,
hoot me a honk, and so right the wrong;
All the broken melodies,
reinvented
will create my song.
As perfect as a dirty corner
wherein lies the history of this room,
swept away by all your basses;
Mister Saxomaphone meet Thunderbroom!
A dizzy release of tension
but miles made me a kind of blue,
with a loosened grip of the sticks
the dischord births the cool.
A novelty of noise, your random riffs
brought my jazz to life, formed this punk
Mister Saxomaphone, I made my own song
from the power of your funk.
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This is so evocative. The image of broken melodies speaks volumes on its own!
Thank you for sharing this with us at Poetic Bloomings. Coming out here to your site to see your original formatting makes it even more enjoyable to read. EXCELLENT!
This is so evocative. The image of broken melodies speaks volumes on its own!
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Thanks Sanaa. Melody is in the ear of the beholder.
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Just came across this. Love it!
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Thanks Rosemary 🙏
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Very creative and well written, with wonderful images and sounds in your words.
I enjoyed your reading as well.
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Thanks Dwight 🙏
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“but miles made me a kind of blue,with a loosened grip of the sticksthe dischord births the cool.”
I like that, and it made me think of Miles Davis.
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Thanks Jennifer 🙏
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Thank you for sharing this with us at Poetic Bloomings. Coming out here to your site to see your original formatting makes it even more enjoyable to read. EXCELLENT!
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Thanks for taking the time Marie 🙏
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