Who puts the meaning
into the gift – is it the
giver or receiver?
I made this for you.
I wrote this poem for you,
whether you want it or not.
A mondo shared with Tanka Tuesday #42 – gift
Well done…and very thought-provoking.
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Thanks Gwen. 🙏
I used to be a receiver, now I’m mostly a giver.
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I am writing this comment for you
whether you want it or not:)
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Comment received 😁
….and accepted! 🙏
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Great poem, Shaun! The last line made me chuckle. Thanks for participating this week!
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks Yvette. 🙏
Sometimes I think a poem like this feels a little dashed off, and this one did write itself quickly. On reflection though, I think I managed to say exactly what I wanted within it’s few lines and provide a little food for thought.
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I think it came out perfectly! :-)
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Shaun, these are good questions. Thanks for the gift of your attention.
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Cheers Colleen 🙏
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Thank you Shaun you make us all ponder this question… Lovely poem 😮💜
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Thank you Willow 🙏
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I read this as a koan, very thought provoking indeed Shaun.
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Thanks Paul 🙏
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so welcome Shaun ❤️
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