From the widespread blackouts
to the districts' neon-bright,
a low voltage of anxiety
crackles through the night.
—I am this city.
In the pulse of stalled traffic,
through the sirens' angry weave,
under lonely concrete bridges
I sometimes sit and grieve.
Then midnight sends her repair crews
to patch the potholes deep
all down my memory lane,
while subconscious consoles sleep.
Applause trembles in my ribs,
a protest locks my jaw
this fractured municipality
is what I'm rooting for.
What this city dares to admit;
the details of its trauma;
the bus route takes a detour
as service restored, much warmer.
Inspired after reading Maia’s Diaries
Today’s Daily Stoic poem:
The City at Night
and
Revenge is a Dish Best Not Served.
Enjoy both of these very much!
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Thanks Lillian 🙏
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a low voltage of anxiety crackles through the night…what a great line in a poem full of atmosphere…
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Thanks Ain 🙏
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You brought the city to life in your poem, Shaun. I felt that low voltage of anxiety crackling through the night and the ‘pulse of stalled traffic’. I think every city has lonely bridges, concrete, brick or metal. I felt relief at the warmer ending.
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Thanks Kim 🙏
I like cities but I’m essentially a country boy.
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You’re most welcome, Shaun. I was born a city girl but I’ve spent the best years of my life in the Norfolk countryside.
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Perfectly written Shaun! I love the idea that we are cities and become where we live. I like how you connect it with your memories and experiences, Great work! 💚
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Thanks Cara 🙏
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Very nicely done, Shaun. 🖤
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Thank you Jennifer 🙏
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Such an atmospheric poem. I also love how the letters are huge and I can read it without my glasses or having to zoom. Just a weird thing I noticed.
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Thanks Reelika 🙏 I work and read on a laptop more than on a phone screen and I’ve been experimenting with the formatting options recently. My guess is that it doesn’t look so good on a phone screen!
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BRAVO!!!
much love
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🙏 Thanks Gillena
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Very well done, Shaun. Your city images are wonderful!
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Thanks Dwight 🙏
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You are welcome, Shaun!
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I like the way you made the city come alive, like it is an organism in itself.
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I just came back from a day trip to Bangkok and glad to be back in the countryside again! Cities are too much for me these days!
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Gorgeously rendered, Shaun!
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Cheers Sanaa 🙏
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