

Shared with Momoetry April Poet Month challenge – free verse and inspired/paraphrased from this post at Spinning Visions
23rd Jan 2026 – Shared with Poets and Storytellers United #211 – Night and Day
“Everything that needs to be said has already been said. But, since no one was listening, everything must be said again.” – Andre Gide


Shared with Momoetry April Poet Month challenge – free verse and inspired/paraphrased from this post at Spinning Visions
23rd Jan 2026 – Shared with Poets and Storytellers United #211 – Night and Day
Intriguing! Wish I could see the piece it is paraphrased from, but I’m having some kind of computer glitch which is preventing that – or maybe Telstra is acting up in my area. (I was taught it is 5am when the Masters walk the earth.)
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No, evidently not Telstra, as Jae (who does not live in Australia) is having trouble too.
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Interesting. It still works for me. Here’s the URL directly, if that makes a difference:
https://spinningvisions.com/2024/08/01/on-time-place/
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Ah yes, that worked. Thank you; I totally love that piece of writing.
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I’m constantly inspired by Makenna’s writing.
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I feel time running out. I’m stuck on the image of the rose garden under concrete. What a great metaphor for these times.
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Thanks Colleen 🙏
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I echo your and Colleen’s words and hope the concrete will break open soon for a garden to re-emerge before the clocks stop ticking.
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Once the clock has stopped on humanity, nature will win.
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Great poem My favourite stanza ‘Fill my hourglass with molasses……’
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Thanks Marja 🙏
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I can’t get the idea/image of an hourglass filled with molasses out of my head now…
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I certainly wish mine was filled with molasses these days.
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Of course, the time with someone special is a good time! Nice thought.
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Thanks Priscilla 🙏
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That’s a great piece of work. At (happy) times I too wish the time becomes so sticky that it doesn’t move…. fast
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Thanks so much 🙏
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Tick tock life is ruled by the clock. C’est la vie for the majority of people. Stark reality:)Rall
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Let go of what is out of our control 🙂
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lovely poem
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Thank you 🙏
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The image of molasses slowly dripping in the hourglass is sticking (sticky) with me.
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Would that time could be like that again! Thanks Sara 🙏
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