I neither cared for you one way or the other, your virtues and character were unknown; Ambivalently sympathetic to your suffering after all the horrible things I’d been shown;
But slowly you were revealed by yourself to be equally similar devils in disguise; Impossible to be unaware of the irony of your actions and repeated ridiculous lies;
And if you were not hated before this you are now surely bound to be; To inflict a holocaust for any reason removes all goodwill and previous sympathy;
There are those who still sit complicit in their silence, they are justifying; As if their own fingers pulled the trigger and, not so quietly, cause all those dying;
What goes around will again come around, this is the beginning of your own demise; With no moral high ground to stand upon there’ll be no one left to sympathise.
It seems most folks don’t like any political message in their poetry but for me, your words are your inner core being laid out, the expression of your belief.
Poetry is political.
I may have to disguise my point of view in a poem about the seasons and new spring blooms!
lol! I agree that most people want to read about lo, broken hearts and sorrows in a poem. But like you I also want to write about the real problems in our world today.
Powerful truth. Shaun, I place my faith in karmic retribution, but at the same time, it is totally unbearable to know of the suffering happening right now to the innocent. How can we make it stop? Protesting, letter writing, voting, calling, poems, all seem to slow the train of death only minimally.
Poetry is political…..yes! This is a powerful piece!
“To inflict a holocaust for any reasonremoves all goodwill and previous sympathy;”and for me, I think the actual holocaust was horiffic. The destruction of humanity can be done in so many ways….and yes, those who are silent are complicit.
a very strong message in your poem Shaun. But I agree that what goes around comes around.
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Thanks Sadje 🙏
It seems most folks don’t like any political message in their poetry but for me, your words are your inner core being laid out, the expression of your belief.
Poetry is political.
I may have to disguise my point of view in a poem about the seasons and new spring blooms!
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lol! I agree that most people want to read about lo, broken hearts and sorrows in a poem. But like you I also want to write about the real problems in our world today.
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Strong and well told, Shaun. A powerful “ugly truth” poem~
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Thanks Jennifer 🙏
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Powerful truth. Shaun, I place my faith in karmic retribution, but at the same time, it is totally unbearable to know of the suffering happening right now to the innocent. How can we make it stop? Protesting, letter writing, voting, calling, poems, all seem to slow the train of death only minimally.
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“There’s enough for all of our need, but not for all of our greed.”
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Poetry is political…..yes! This is a powerful piece!
“To inflict a holocaust for any reasonremoves all goodwill and previous sympathy;”and for me, I think the actual holocaust was horiffic. The destruction of humanity can be done in so many ways….and yes, those who are silent are complicit.
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Thanks Lillian. 🙏
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A very pointed and strong poem, Shaun. Good for you!
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Thank you.
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