Over His Creation – 27th July 2025

~ shaun tenzenmen

I’ve had enough and I want to quit
after looking at what I created;
Seeing what the useless humans have done with it

and all their stupidity aggregated!

I gave the chance of pleasure and peace

and slowly evolved their brains;
But the endless wars that never cease
means that little of beauty remains;



I’m wasting time being worshipped
you’ve all forgotten my intention;
Your happiness can’t be purchased
there is no final redemption;

The seeds of wisdom planted within

but humanity always wanted more;
It was pretty simple to begin

but now I don’t know what it’s for?


I’m done with this, I’ve thought it through

I think I’ll make another extinction!
Start again with a better cosmic brew

and a better book of fiction!

Shared with W3 prompt #169. This wasn’t written for the prompt, but fits quite well with the idea.

12 thoughts on “Over His Creation – 27th July 2025”

  6. Shaun, you poem delivers a powerful, satirical punch—voicing divine disillusionment with humanity in stark, direct terms. The tone is biting yet darkly humorous, especially in the last stanza with its cosmic reset and “better book of fiction.” It’s a bold reflection on how far we’ve strayed from the ideals of creation. Well done. 👏

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