The world clicks by in screens of graphic gain, each hour refined for either profit, loss, or trend. Praising the sharpest tools ever made to explain, yet wondering why these days refuse to bend.
I walk beneath the wires and silent trees and feel a hunger numbers cannot feed. Our minds seem full of malaise and disease, which is surely something none of us need.
I’d trade this clever age, so sure it’s new, to be a Pagan suckled in a creed outworn*, to hear a god breathe as the wind blows through, and see the ocean settle for a new dawn.
These times, obsolete is the wonder, not belief; The myth awakes where certainty may sleep.
You have said it so well – as time passes by, new knowledge which not everyone can or want to understand fully is occupying the minds – this knowledge is welcome but it is taking us away from the nature – the pagan way of understanding of the nature & world.
Our minds seem full of malaise and disease, which is surely something none of us need.
This made me think about all the times I wished I had lived in a different time period- then read the actual history of what life was really like. So well done, Shaun.
That line “a hunger numbers cannot feed” really got me—it says exactly what all the screens keep missing. I also like how the poem leans into wonder without feeling sentimental.
‘I’d trade this clever age, so sure it’s new,to be a Pagan suckled in a creed outworn*,to hear a god breathe as the wind blows through,and see the ocean settle for a new dawn.’
Great stuff. Wordsworth rides again!
“I’d trade this clever age, so sure it’s new,…” So would so many of us.
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I rode the wave of modern technology but still rooted in more simpler times.
Thanks Josie 🙏
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Well done Shaun
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Thank you Sadje 🙏
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You’re welcome
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Shaun, this is lovely! You really made the Wordsworth line your own!! Bravo!!
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Thanks Val 🙏
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Thanks Nolcha 🙏
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You’re welcome!
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You have said it so well – as time passes by, new knowledge which not everyone can or want to understand fully is occupying the minds – this knowledge is welcome but it is taking us away from the nature – the pagan way of understanding of the nature & world.
Our minds seem full of malaise and disease,
which is surely something none of us need.
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Thanks Sumana 🙏
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This made me think about all the times I wished I had lived in a different time period- then read the actual history of what life was really like. So well done, Shaun.
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Thanks Violet 🙏 As we often discover too late, it’s all about balance.
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This is an amazing poem. I think your Wordsworth stanza is my favorite because your lines that follow his echo my own heart —
“to hear a god breathe as the wind blows through,and see the ocean settle for a new dawn.”
So well done.
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Thanks so much Sally 🙏 glad that you liked it.
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So good!
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Thanks Heather 🙏
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You’re welcome.
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That line “a hunger numbers cannot feed” really got me—it says exactly what all the screens keep missing. I also like how the poem leans into wonder without feeling sentimental.
~David
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Cheers David 🙏
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*hug!*
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Beautiful poem, Shaun. These lines stick with me-
‘I’d trade this clever age, so sure it’s new,to be a Pagan suckled in a creed outworn*,to hear a god breathe as the wind blows through,and see the ocean settle for a new dawn.’
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Thanks Indira 🙏
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