I’ll never say that I miss you,
the bird that left few feathers for my pillow,
an ache I will never confess,
but whoever runs their fingers along my bones
will feel your name etched on each one
with a cornerstone of soiled sentiments.
This poem is really a collaboration, with only a little input on my part. Lines 1, 4, 5 and 6 were written by EC at the erroneous choices blog, in a short piece titled ‘lies we live under’. It stood out to me as a brilliant, poetic little paragraph that I thought I could use the idea, along with the last two words, as an alliterative full stop. EC was gracious enough to allow me to use it in full and so here it is, with my two added lines, shared for the dVerse quadrille prompt – bird.
Today’s Daily Stoic poem:

This is very well written, Shaun. I love the idea of names written on each bone.
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Cheers Dwight 🙏
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:>)
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I love the strong and resolute message – Jae
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Thanks Jae 🙏
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Heartache felt to the core… so well penned 💞Suzanne
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Thanks Suzanne 🙏
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the one that got away – the feathers and pillow capture that loss so well
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Thanks Laura 🙏
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Shaun, this lands with a quiet heaviness for me.
~David
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Cheers David 🙏
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🤗
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what a nice surprise! how lovely your offering was here
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Glad you like it EC, though it’s 70% your work anyway!
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So poignant, the bird that left few feathers, yet left a name on every bone.
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Thanks Sherry 🙏
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This came together beautifully. And so visual.
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Thanks De 🙏 EC’s original 4 lines were so vivid and inspiring, they stood out immediately to me when I originally read them.
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Nice quadrille. Bravo for collaborating.
Thank you for dropping by my blog
much love
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Thanks Gillena 🙏
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I love the piece which inspired your ‘collaboration’ (thanks for including the link) and I love even more what you have made of it. It makes me shiver with delight!
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Thanks Rosemary 🙏 I’m glad that you investigated the original lines too 👍
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Heartbreaking poem, Shaun!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks Yvette 🙏
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Your poem went way over my head. I will be doing carpet cleaning in Spring TX tomorrow and I asked my entire team to come prepared to explain this poem to me. Hopefully someone on the team has some clever insights for me.
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I think this comment is excellent Katie! It may be a blessing that you have never felt like this. 🙏
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