let’s just play,
dabble about
all the day.
it’s just fun,
a little learn,
a slow burn.
in training,
without success
or explaining.
new pursuits,
a little try
before I die.
Want to hear my poem put to music? LISTEN HERE and please tell me what you think? Is it just fun, does it add anything?
I don’t know what to think yet!?
If the AI song above isn’t to your taste, what about this reading? Please let me know your opinion! 🙏
Shared with Momoetry April Poet Month challenge – micropoetry, based on a section of ‘Beginners: The Joy and Transformative Power of Lifelong Learning’ by Tom Vanderbilt and quoting Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi
Charlie Zero The Poet Music picks & Reviews #18 and my quick thoughts:
Ash Koosha – fine enough for interesting electronica but not my jam.
Colin Stetson – sensing a theme here… 😄
Conan – Oh, guitars! Woohoo! But…this style too dull and repetitive for me. I mean, I have some music like this already and I can just listen to that. There’s nothing here that says Conan is in anyway superior. I’m sure this would have more impact live but I’m also envisaging that there’s not much entertainment going on onstage…
Okilly Dokilly – Fun ideas here (that I probably wouldn’t have picked up on them without reading the lyrics) and there are heavy guitars but it’s still not scratching my itch. Or am I just in a bad mood?
U – this has some ideas going on (see Ask Koosha above)
Despite none of this being of interest I’m glad to have been presented with them here and taken the chance to listen to some new music. That’s what it’s about.
1994ever 
Was the poem really generated by AI? If so you can probably use it as a starting point (much like found poetry)… but we need a bit of that lightness before death for sure.
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I wrote the poem. The song was made using SUNO.
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Ah…so you wrote the poem. I LOVE the first stanza!
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