Toe Gurbo – 24th September 2025

~ shaun tenzenmen

Put your petal to the medal,
now you’ve tasted two worms.
You are a fettle of fine fella,
bleached with geeky-clean squirms.

A wolf in cheap clothing,
you’ve tuttered your boast.
The very pineapple of politeness,
the wiggest binner at the parading toast.

Shared with dVerse Quadrille – petal. My mind works in odd ways sometimes. Just say ‘no’ to autumn poems this year!

36 thoughts on “Toe Gurbo – 24th September 2025”

  14. A great example of using humor and quirky language to soften criticism. A beautiful piece of critique.

    ‘…the wiggest binner at the parading toast.’ Indeed.

    Outstanding play of words.

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