I was working on this poem when the W3 prompt arrived to write about silence and I have somewhat jammed my poem into it, so it doesn’t quite fully meet the criteria but here it is anyway. Above, formatted as desired and below is what WordPress decides to display it like.
Some days are made for speaking, others for silence; a stride into the spotlight, a tiptoe back into the shadows.
Some moments call for stepping forward, others for stillness; a bull entering the ring, the matador focused.
…….and
Some moments call for stillness, others for stepping forward; the river doesn’t share any secrets until it finds the waterfall.
Some days are made for silence, others for speaking; the words are lost in wonder until the whisper becomes a roar.
All of the noise rushed through the open window, as I willingly wound my way through the Purbecks; from the Cove to Old Harry, a chalky knife on the map. Is this the life?
The dilapidated rust bucket rumbles along as it takes me to the outside; toking to this song, a mind expand A fiery gun hand, my troubles all left behind.
Where there’s all creations, their buds and spawn; here I am! without a care, ensconced within a bed of air, joining in celebrating the wind ruffling my hair.
As a tone deaf chorus leaves my lip, sung from my very own big ship; happiness and joy fills my face with a beaming smile a mile wide, a dirty boy with no bright side, so often lost to his dreaming.
All around the world ships and irons are heard clanging; a banging of our headbones, waiting to go off and things.
On land and in the sea, so far from tidy suburbia; all the poor soldiers know, despite their charms, that’s the way we all go…
Written for the GloPoWriMo Day 18 prompt: Craft your own poem that recounts an experience of driving/riding and singing, incorporating a song lyric.
It surely was a joyous time, somewhere around 1989, I’d guess, driving my old shitty Morris Marina around the Purbeck Hills, checking out Lulworth Cove and Old Harry’s Rocks, smoking a joint and blasting Cardiacs songs with the windows down and me crooning along as best as I could, for no one in particular, perhaps a tern or two.
The bolded words are some of my favourite Cardiacs lyrics taken from the song ‘Big Ship’ – a joyous anthem that I shared often with The Pond during the late 80s shows. There are many other references to Cardiacs’ songs contained within, along with some band folklore. The title is an obvious nod to the master musician Dr Tim Smith, whom I miss dearly (despite never speaking to him), as do so many others who are ‘in it’.
All this ties in nicely to the recent release of Cardiacs’ LSD album, which is currently giving me earworms.
Unaware of the power wielded through the letterbox of her hijab; Stars pour out at the questions fielded, a butterfly chase for boys to grab.
Inspired by a grade 7 student at my school who has the most stunning eyes. Whenever I see her, I’m reminded of the girl who was on the cover of National Geographic (below). It also makes me consider love and attraction in other cultures.
I’m sending you all a letter You’ll receive it when I have gone It may not be anything much But may mean something to someone
But the meaning it will contain Multiplied by my own demise Even if only for a time There’s not much left to give surprise
This is a reference to scheduling posts far in the future that will be delivered after I die. This could be one. Who knows? 26th Sep 2025 – Shared with dVerse OLN as not many eyes made it to this one.
“Now try coughing,” he repeated. An unfinished symphony.
The blue of the car’s metal, twisted and still.
The blue of the swimming pool, a cold, empty tile.
The blue of the television, buzzing in a dark room.
This is the blue of a cage with the door swung wide.
A terrible, hollow liberty.
She wraps herself in a blue crystal necklace, a weight from the past. She sleeps in a bare, empty blue room.
She wants the blue of silence, the colour of no pain, Nothings important.
“Tongues shall be stilled and knowledge shall come to an end.” You belong to all of us.
And the world leaks in. This blue is not quiet. It is an insistent hum.
The blue of his eyes, asking for a truth she won’t give.
She tries to give it all away, but the blue follows. It is the colour of the thread that keeps pulling her back.
The blue of the sheet music, a song she thought she’d buried. Music so beautiful it can’t be destroyed.
The liberty is not in the emptiness. It is in the choosing. You’ve always gotta hold onto something
“Tongues shall be stilled and knowledge shall come to an end.”
You belong to all of us.
The white of a wedding dress, left in a trunk.
The white of a pigeon’s wing, taking what it’s given.
The white of his own breath, ghostly in the Paris cold. This is a blank space, an erased life, impotent and powerless.
The white of a passport page, stamped with a refusal.
The white of a 2 franc coin, the last one in his pocket, that will not let go.
He is nothing, a white zero. A man made empty.
But a white suitcase carries him home.
The white snow of Warsaw covers the same old streets.
This white is a clean page, where everything is possible.
The white thread missing. The white of a lie, perfectly told. A white, calculated revenge, by burying a white Russian in Powązki.
Equality is not in the winning or the losing.
It is in the white of two figures, perfectly matched in the distance. The white of a promise, finally understood.
A red sweater hung on a grey chair. A red light on a wet street at night.
This is the red of a closed door. The red of a stopped heart.
Across the street, a red lamp in a window. An old man listens to the secrets in the air.
He knows the red of betrayal, the flush of shame. Now, wanting nothing.
This is the red of a thread, thin and unseen. It connects a falling book to a worried hand.
A red judicial robe fading in a dark closet. People have a right to their secrets.
A red neon sign buzzes over an empty café. Another story that you don’t know.
A flare sent up from one lonely island to another. The red of a ferry’s light, cutting through the fog.
No longer a stop, but a start.
The red of a common pulse, beating in the chest. The red of a door, finally opening.
Who are you and what else do you know?
This fraternity is final.
Shared with dVerse MTB – colour and I was immediately reminded of the Three Colours Trilogy. It’s been a long time since I watched these movies and this poem did make use of AI to remind me of the details of the stories, from which I started pulling out and reworking various phrases and ideas. I’m not completely sold on my own formatting above and thought the French flag idea would be fun but this particular image is a little garish. I’ll try and come back to this a little later.
14th Oct 2025 – I have since watched all three movies again and revised this poem and flag image. I recommend these movies very highly. They’ve also got me back into watching the longer form, which is good because I have hundreds of unwatched movies at home! 24th Oct 2025 – Shared with dVerse OLN since this poem has been rewritten.
A fun little ditty about something that was pointed out to me by Bronwyn (an Australian) back in the 90s, that the English dress very dully in greys and browns.
This came to mind when reading this little factoid today: When astronomers combined the light of billions of galaxies, they found the average colour of the universe to be a warm beige, whimsically dubbed “Cosmic Latte.”