
Shatters
Into pieces
A thought multiplying
Mirrored, reflected, refracted
Splinters
Submitted to No Theme Thursday and the attached picture.
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem with twenty-two syllables distributed in five lines: 2, 4, 6, 8, 2.
Line 1 has one word (the title).
Line 2 has two words that describe the title.
Line 3 has three words that tell the action.
Line 4 has four words that express the feeling
Line 5 has one word which recalls the title.
Today I’m feeling:
Not so terrible but I can’t speak clearly because of whatever is going on in my throat.
I felt ok to get up but once I got to school I felt tired again.
Today I’m grateful for:
My grade 10s contacting me whilst I was at the cafe, asking if I could teach them immediately, as they had no other classes today and didn’t want to wait until 2.30. It seemed like a good idea because it meant that I could finish at 12.30 and go home too.
This turned out to be a double-edged sword. The grade 10 was simple enough and the grade 8s immediately afterwards went well enough too and I headed home. However, I was low on energy and motivation and had an hour snooze and after getting up again from that, just felt like wanting to sleep more.
This meant that I didn’t do any reading or writing today and I’m back in bed again now at 7.30 pm
The best thing about today was:
I put my grade 8s into random pairs to practice conversation. Most of them complained and asked to swap partners, to which i just ignored them and asked them to get on with it.
This showed me who was prepared to just get on with it and do what was asked rather than avoiding it until the very end. None of them got away.
What was out of your control today and how did you handle it?
Despite my fairly low feeling today I didn’t let anything in particular bother me.
Something I learned today?
I came across this quote that I like: “People demand freedom of speech as a compensation for the freedom of thought which they seldom use.” – Soren Kierkegaard

Lovely poem.
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Thanks Sadje. 🙏
I’ve been a bit stuck this week. I think I have Covid and feeling really tired and unmotivated. I really liked this picture and was struggling to come up with something until I placed a restriction on it (the cinquain) which tightened my focus.
I’m very interested in how restriction, rather than freedom, forces more creativity.
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Yes, sometimes words/ syllable restrictions can evoke more creative ideas. I’m sorry that you aren’t feeling well. Get better soon
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Thanks. 🙏
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You’re welcome
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I hope you feel better soon!
Excellent poem as always! 👏👏👏
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After a 16 hour ‘nap’ I think I’m on the other side of it now!
Thanks 🙏
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Good to hear! 👍👍
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