Spin Sorrow – 5th September 2024

Spin your sorrow into strength
Weave new words of wisdom
From your free-spun mind

Deny spider thoughts at length
A lost control decision
Loosened the threads that bind

Put back together the unravelled
With stories around the campfire
And a beaten-up guitar

A quadrille (44 words) for dVerse Quadrille #207 – spin and first line inspired and paraphrased from this poem ‘Losing my grip’ by Carol Anne

12 thoughts on “Spin Sorrow – 5th September 2024

  1. This personal call to attention is great and after the effort of containing spider thoughts and spinning strength from sorrow, Shaun – a chillout around the camp fire sounds just the ticket…

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