Uncertainty filled
Troublesome future begins
The big questions unanswered
Yet you bring to me
A much-needed light to shine
My compass, my map and guide
Shared with Tanka Tuesday (life change) and Moonwashed Weekly Prompt (where I’ve taken Eugi’s words and added to them).
Mondo poems are often very brief collaborative affairs (usually written by two poets) that present a question. (The question needs to be open-ended and poignant and should be a test of the answerer’s wit). The answer is written in the style of trying to glean meaning from nature. My poem doesn’t quite fit this requirement but let’s use our imagination.
Mondos can be as short as a one-liner or as long as two 5-7-7 syllable stanzas.
The first stanza presents the question; the second stanza gives the answer. We usually write this form in the spirit of Zen, responsive through meditation and observation of natural surroundings.

A beautiful poem in response to both challenges. Thanks for joining in.
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Thanks Sadje. 🙏
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Most welcome
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Shaun, I appreciate the afterword. I wondered who “you” was. Nature has helped me relax for the reasons you give.
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Re-reading it again it seems that I was still under the influence of Sadje’s lighthouse picture prompt!
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I like your interpretation – ‘you’ is a blank that can be filled in by the reader.
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Cool!
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Excellent blending of prompts, Shaun, and well done on the mondo.
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Thanks Eugi 🙏
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You’re welcome.
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Great poem, Shaun! Like Lisa, I found your afterword gave me more depth to the poem.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks Yvette 🙏
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Hi Shaun, I like how you made this poem work for Sadje’s prompt. I can see where a special someone helped you find the meaning to life.
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Thanks Colleen. 🙏 I think the special someone is a combination of a few different people.
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And that works too!
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This is a beautiful tribute to someone 💜💜
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Thank you and thanks for reading and commenting. 🙏
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An excellent, sweet poem, Shaun!
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Thank you Nicole! 🙏
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the mondo feels like a remarkable form. Very nicely done✍✨.
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Thank you. 🙏. Give it a go!
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I like this style. Wonderful blending of prompts.
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Thank you 🙏
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