born indignant:
life, indeed surprised
the priest cried prophecy
I understood after I died
My first go at an erasure poem. Original text ‘The Other Language’ by Khalil Gibran. The picture is not as pretty as I would like but I do like the poem that came out of it.
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Hey! You created one – I like it! There’s a fateful air to the words.
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Yes! I did this one a while ago and will try more but these take a lot more time than I usually have, especially to try and make them more attractive. I will try to emulate your methods in some way 👍
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They can take a while. You don’t need to emulate my methods at all! I link the words but if they’re falling down the page, you don’t have to. As long as you enjoy it, it doesn’t feel like it takes too much time.
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I liked your method of nice clean squares and lines. It makes me think of a train map.
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Love it.
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Thanks so much 🙏
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Very welcome 🙂
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This is so cool. The words 👏🏽 U even like the artsy way you present it. Very creative. 👏🏽
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Thanks Selma 🙏 I’m encouraged to do more!
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I mean, “I” even like… I enjoyed it lots. Thanks so much. Yes, please do it again. 👏🏽
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