she was
playfully smart
knowing when to be dumb
and when to smile, revealing who
she was
he was
a cowardly
bully, even his friends
didn’t care for him very much
either
and so
she tried to tame
him, not understanding
that deep down, he could not change who
he was
Shared with dVerse MTB – cinquain and based on a situation between a couple of my students

Sadly, so often true. I love the way you have worked cinquain to your advantage in this poem.
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Spot on. A bully never changes
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This particular one being a teenager, there is still some hope but it will take a lot of effort on his part.
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Only if he wants to. Others can’t change him.
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Tale well told in cinq!
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Thanks Ron 🙏
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Wow! The flow, the continuity, the story ~~ great write!!!!
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Cheers 🙏
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A great slice of real life!
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Thanks Dwight 🙏
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Oh dear, no ‘happy ever after’ here!
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Not this time, I think.
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People don’t change and some women are slow learners. There is a saying “a leopard never changes its spots.”
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Some women and, I would venture, most men!
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Your comment made me smile. Life is through the eyes of the beholder.
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I hope she’s okay. I also hope she never again feels the need to play dumb and to only smile for real.
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In general, she is a smart kid.
I don’t know why she persists with this guy especially as she is always quarrelling with him, which is what leads me to conclusion that she is trying to mold him into what she wants him to be. And while that may be for him to be a better person, it’s not really up to her.
She will figure it out.
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A whole short story in 15 lines. Wow!
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Life is simple, I guess, but I wouldn’t want mine boiled down to just 15 lines! Haha!
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Smiles!
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Alas… some people cannot be changed
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Great job! You used the form to your advantage.
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Thank you 🙏
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