Thanks Kim 🙏 I was considering using the ‘held a question’ line as a refrain but felt it might be better left as a little side thought for those who might want to ponder the idea.
Thanks Ange 🙏 Maybe answering the questions could be a prompt some day! As to the line you mentioned I was considering ‘salty’ but thought ‘sooty’ was a little better, being more evocative and less direct.
Oh you made me hold my breath as well as the questions, love this! 💞
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Thanks so much Suzanne 🙏
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Nicely done, Shaun, with intriguing questions. I especially like the thought of holding a question, and these lines:
‘Has the oak memorised the lightningbearing the scars, weeping?’
and
‘If my heart were a house,who keeps opening doorsthat were never closed?’
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Thanks Kim 🙏 I was considering using the ‘held a question’ line as a refrain but felt it might be better left as a little side thought for those who might want to ponder the idea.
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You’re welcome, Shaun. You made a good choice.
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You nailed it with the last one.
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Thanks Reena 🙏
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I love everything about this Shaun I’ve read it a few times and now I want to know the answers this line in particular is brilliant
’What name is murmured on the tip of a sooty tongue?’ 🙌🩷
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Thanks Ange 🙏 Maybe answering the questions could be a prompt some day! As to the line you mentioned I was considering ‘salty’ but thought ‘sooty’ was a little better, being more evocative and less direct.
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“have yiu ever held a question”
WOW!!! Very nice
much love
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Thanks so much Gillena 🙏
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Interesting questions, Shaun. This one stuck ‘What name is murmured
on the tip of a sooty tongue?’ I’d like to know, too. 🙂
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Thanks Smitha 🙏
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Really good questions to ponder. That last one is my favorite part. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you Grace 🙏
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The repetition of stanzas, questions, constantly re-focussed the attention – great questions, Shaun…
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Thanks Andrew 🙏
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Yes! I love that last question!
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Thank you 🙏
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Shaun, very interesting questions. Really enjoyed this.
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Thanks Punam 🙏
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