You Can Tell – 12th March 1988

You can tell yesterday was Sunday
Cos it’s Monday now today
You can tell that it’s no joke
But just the fun that I poke
You can tell that she is looking nice
But you won’t like her advice
You can tell that something is sin
It’s just something to do with feeling

12th Mar 2023 – Hardly genius but I never stopped writing and trying. Is ChatGPT genius? I asked it to make a better version and got this improvement:

Sunday’s past, and Monday’s here,
The week’s anew, let’s make it clear.
My playful jests, they may provoke,
But rest assured, it’s all in stroke.

She’s looking fine, a sight to see,
But heed her words with caution, be.
A feeling stirs, a hint of wrong,
But let it go, and sing a song.

Video – 1st March 1988

Ever get the feeling
Someone’s watching you
You’ve got to be careful
Just what you get up to
When you are old
And about to leave the show
You’ll be presented
With your life on video
Wouldn’t you know it
There’s just no time to watch it
You can die knowing
That they’re the ones who’ve got it
Remember the mistakes
Ahh, it’s all coming back
Oh, shit

27th Nov 2021 – Somewhat inspired by the nervous anticipation of being presented with a video of your whole life once you reach heaven, where you will be forced to analyse every single moment of your life. Or is it hell? Also a nod to Rudimentary Peni’s ‘Only Human’