This poem saves lives
Drawing down the heavens
When without inspiration
All at sixes and sevens
This painting saves lives
Painted with blood and muck
When without inspiration
And the world seems to suck
This song saves lives
Proffered just as it was
Inspired by the chorus
And sung loud just because
These words save lives
In these perilous times
And inspiration found
Reading between the lines
Inspired (unironically) by The Red Hand Files #274 – check it out for some wise words from old man Nick Cave.
Submitted to Weekly Prompts Wednesday Challenge INSPIRATION
13th Sep 2024 – Shared with Poets and Storytellers United – speak up or stay silent
3rd Nov 2024 – Shared with Ragtag Daily Prompt – chorus
Today I’m feeling:
Under the weather again. Last night I could feel a slight tickle and ache in my throat as I was about to sleep.
I slept well though not enough and my alarm woke me up with a start to which I succumbed to another 30 minutes of snoozing, skipping exercise. When I got up I could feel the oncoming sore throat, confirmed by blood in my nose.
My mood was down a little too but it’s Friday so let’s go and get it done.
Today I’m grateful for:
Discovering that there is a holiday on Monday. Yippee!
The best thing about today was:
A chilled vibe at school (see below) and spending about five hours at House, reading, lesson planning, blogging and writing. What a job!
What was out of your control today and how did you handle it?
At the morning flag ceremony, I noticed that my grade 7 classes were less than half in attendance and discovered that they were attending some meeting about a field trip. OK….
When it came to class time there were only about ten students and they told me the rest were still in the meeting.
I went to find Kru Karn, their homeroom teacher who didn’t know anything about where they were. I mentioned a field trip and she said ‘oh yes, there’s about 6 students going.’ I asked when it was and she thought that it was in the holiday. ‘Hmm’, I said, ‘that’s weird because there are more than 6 students missing from the class?’
She came to my class and talked with one of the students and was surprised to find out herself that many of the student’s parents skipped the process of advising her about their children going on the trip and, more importantly, the trip starts on Monday and is for one week!
The communication here is so crazy – no one knows what’s going on.
I said ‘Well, I guess that’s it for teaching these kids this semester.’ Kru Karn agreed and advised to start doing their grading files. And it leaves me with another day with no classes again already.
Something I learned today?
As I was wandering around Baipad’s class this morning, because my class was cancelled and Kru Ren wasn’t there, I learned that a couple of students are taking money from the lazy ones to complete their coursework for them.
It’s enterprising of the hard-working kids to make some spare cash but disappointing from a teacher’s perspective.
Review your acts, and then for vile deeds chide yourself, for good be glad. — Discourses 3.10
I offered Baipad to help her on Monday with all her catchup work. Let’s see if she gets it together to actually wake up and do it.
I helped various students in their different classes today as my own classes being mostly free time for everyone.
Kru Fluke dropped in to visit. I gave her a big smile and a hug, happy to see her again.
25 THINGS ABOUT LIFE I WISH I HAD KNOWN 10 YEARS AGO – 20. Enjoy Small Things. I like clichés because they are true.
Over the last three or four years of self-improvement I’ve followed the Noticing Things blog (I forget the proper name), thought about gratitude every day (with a couple of exceptions) and been writing, journalling, blogging etc. All of these combined have led me to enjoy the small things.
Partly due to this, I’m not often in the vicinity of big things and things that I once thought of as big seem comparatively small these days too (the circumstance of ageing).
One thing that I was doing more of last year or the year before was savouring moments. I don’t often stop to remind myself to savour something now. I should practice that again.


I like what you did here. And thank you for sharing your poem with our challenge.
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Thank you for this affirmation. And thank you also for the link to that wonderful declaration by Nick Cave! I hope everyone else rushes to read it too.
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He’s an inspiring writer and a great lyricist. I often write after reading the Red Hand Files.
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I was unaware of it before but have bookmarked it now.
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In fact have subscribed.
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I don’t know if it saves lives (Can art?) but I hope art brings consolation and comfort for those looking for support and a common voice… which is life-giving in its own way, I suppose. I like the rallying voice in the link too… a plea to keep on creating no matter what.
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Thanks Rajani. 🙏 It seems you answered your own question 😎
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I love Nick Cave – and I love your poem..the repetition and questioning are spot on – Jae
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Thanks Jae. I’m a fan of his early work musically but still find him very inspiring otherwise.
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Beautiful words Yes the arts save lives We need it desperately these days. Love the cat We have a red one A big girl we adopted from an old man who couldn’t take her into an old peoples home
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Thank you 🙏
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The arts can bring comfort or stir action. And I must add, the entire planet seems encapsulated in the eyes of that cat. 🙂
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I have a vague notion that our loved ones that have passed follow us through the eyes of cats and dogs.
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I know I’ve heavily relied on art to get me through some of my darkest moments. It’s easy to forget how powerful the right idea expressed at the right time can be.
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Likewise. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Love the repeating form.
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Thank you. The inspiration was repetition and repetition was inspiration.
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Yes we are fortunate to have music and poetry and the arts. I really liked your diary entry. Thank you for sharing it.
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Thanks. I just read the diary entry again and am reminded that I still don’t take enough time to savour what I’m doing!
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art does I.inspire we all know, and it also saves, there are people who know that…. beautiful write
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Thank you 🙏
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This poem is inspiring. Beautiful writing, and love the nod to Nick. i read it, and found it uplifting even in these times.
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Yes, ‘these times’ have gotten to me a little recently too but I need to remind myself that there is more out there than just what I might be looking at.
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Good point.
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