is it true that it’s a weakness?
– a tender trap that crushes;
a sweet anguish to be mad about,
– a cherished affliction;
ah! blissful misery, hopeful despair
– crushed under its own weight.
A sijo for Tanka Tuesday #48 – love and passion and also shared with Poets and Storytellers United #214
Today’s Daily Stoic poem:

Wow! These two poems play well off each other. I enjoyed them both!
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Oh, I hadn’t noticed that. I wrote them at different times.
Thanks Kaci 🙏
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Wow to this. To me it sounds as if Keats was still around. You’re amazing. Thanks.
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😲 I’m humbled. Thanks Selma 🙏
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Such wisdom especially in the second verse. You warn us, remind of that first painful crush…. Such sweet pleasure… Inevitably causes pain. 💜💜
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I tell my students that they should have their hearts broken at least twice before finishing high school. That way they are well practised for more serious relationships that will happen in their futures.😃
Thanks Willow 🙏
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That is very wise of you 💜
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