it’s my con – fusion
that gets deep under your skin
i’m penetrating
my ghost particles
in trillions, unaffected
they see right through you
Shared with SenHai Saturday #40 image prompt
Today’s Daily Stoic poem:


Sounds like a sad relationship! Thanks for joining.
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Hmm… maybe? This one is written without metaphor in mind, but it certainly can be read into it 👍
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We all take away something different. 🙂
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love the word play Shaun and you take a complex concept from particle physics and turn it into a metaphor for emotional intimacy and distance brilliantly 🙌
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Thanks Ange 🙏 The sunlight in the picture made me wonder about how neutrinos work and I went off looking for information and ended up with this little write.
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