Shared with W3 #200 – alphabet poetry
ash beneath cradle;
drifting
echoes,
fade;
glowing hushes
in jewelled knots
linger,
murmur;
night observations
pale quietly;
ribbons, silvery tin;
under veils,
wispy x-rays
yearning zero.
Today’s Daily Stoic poem:
1994ever 
Really good poem!
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Thank you 🙏
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I love this Shaun, I feel it whispering through me … from beginning to end 💞
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Thanks Suzanne 🙏
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Shaun this is a wonderful atmospheric and tactile piece and what’s great is the ‘alphabet’ form doesn’t stand out it reads beautifully 🩷
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Thanks Ange 🙏 I think it came out well too!
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Excellent poem.
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Thanks Rall 🙏
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Nicely done! I definitely think this was the more difficult of the two options- and you killed it!
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Thanks Violet 🙏 I hadn’t planned on doing them in abc order originally but the words just fell into place.
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Excellent poem, Shaun. This form is difficult, I think.
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Thanks Indira 🙏
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My pleasure, Shaun.
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A lovely write Shaun! It is so smooth and silky – reminds me of pouring cream into coffee…
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Thanks Val 🙏
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Beautiful poem, Shaun!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks again Yvette 🙏
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Shaun, this has a quiet, haunting feel to me. “Ash beneath cradle” and “wispy x-rays / yearning zero” really slaps.
~David
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Thanks David 🙏
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